Jbierly2's Blog

Understanding the whole process

jbierly2 — Mon, 20 Apr 2009 17:10:00 +0000

out of all the revisions I,students and teacher have made i noticed dont throw in junk, be clear and specific and lable things if needed. always proof read your work and think of ways of always improving your work.

fused sentence

jbierly2 — Mon, 20 Apr 2009 17:03:12 +0000

i noticed sentences i write quickly sometimes become fused sentences because of the way im writting out the sentence.

Visuals

jbierly2 — Wed, 15 Apr 2009 17:24:40 +0000

When working on a assignment with visuals make sure to label the visuals and what they do so the reader does not have to guess what there looking at. Also give credit to who or where you got the visual from.

look over

jbierly2 — Wed, 15 Apr 2009 17:20:02 +0000

Once done with a project or an assignment have others look over your work to see what they think about it. See if their advise is helpful or not .You can learn from others…

Adding trash to assignments

jbierly2 — Mon, 06 Apr 2009 18:14:01 +0000

Sometimes when i do some work it will look to skimpy so ill start to add things so it will bulk up. But i need to watch out what i put into my work because it might not work well with it and could make it look less professional or look like a bunch trash cause ill keep talking about the same thing over and over and not get the point across

Things im noticing about revising old assignments

jbierly2 — Mon, 06 Apr 2009 18:01:12 +0000

When im revising old assignments i notice sometimes ill go to much into an idea and lose thought of the main idea because there are to many ideas in ideas. So i need to be sure not to lose focus on the main idea.